Questions for readers

So I have started working on ‘Red Rose’ the novel! And by started working I mean I wrote down a list of scenes I want in the story and I am trying to get the guts to show it to my mom to see what she thinks. I also asked my roommates what they thought. I mean I really don’t want to waste my time on something that I know will be a dud.

But the reason I’m writing this is because I had a few questions for all of you:

I’m writing this because of you guys I want to know:

What do you want to see in the novel?

Is there anything that didn’t make it into Red Rose that you would like to see in the novel?

Anything you think I should take out?

Also in case your all wondering, yes I’m still working on “A Tall Tower” and even planning out the next story. There is just so much I have to get done that I am rather neglecting the poor story.

Red Rose the novel

So I know you guys are all fans of Red Rose and such... but... if I were to change some (all) of the names, add a few (lot) of scenes, and sent it to a publisher... would you all be interested? I want your true and unbiased option, would it be good enough?

I'm kind of torn, I mean everyone I show seems to like it... but as a shot cute story or a good story? And I know it needs LOTS of work but that's totally fine with me. I just need to know it the STORY is good enough.

Please tell me...

-Liz